Descriptive Writing

WALT... Write descriptively using a rang of language

Plan

• Sea of Sharks
• Ancient Story
• Mummys
• Noon
• 1988
• Island

Oreantation

• Who - Goofy
• When - On a bright sunny day
• Where - On an Island

Once there was an ancient story in the bottom of the sea of sharks. This is a story so ancient not even the mummy's can get it.

In 1988 there was a man named Goofy. Goofy was a nice a generous man who know everyone on the island ( The island is off the coast of Australia ). When Goofy heard about the ancient story he was not that kind and nice to everyone, he just wanted the story all to himself. There were more people that want the story as well, so he went with them but in the nice way, but what they didn’t know is that he was trying to get the story and keep it for himself.

When they arrived at the sea of sharks they seen the story, it was about 100 feet down under the sharks they had only one chance to get down there. Instead of going down one at a time to see how far one would go but no they all went at the same time. All of them died except 4 of the and there was only 20 people that had gone, when they got the bottom of the sea there is a little cave that they saw a glimpse of light that shone from the book.

Graffiti is it Art or Messy?

Is Graffiti Art or Messy?

I think Graffiti is messy because costs a lot of money and time to the city council to clean it up.

Firstly, each year the city council pay $30 Million dollars to clean up all the Graffiti around Western Australia. However in reality this figure is likely to be underestimated due to the difficulty in obtaining an accurate cost largely to the nature of Graffiti offences, its reporting and removal.

Secondly, in Australia every year in March they have a Graffiti free week. They do this because the council and house owners go round the country and clean up all the Graffiti that Graffiti Artists have done to the whole of Australia

In my opinion i think Graffiti is messy!!!

What do you think it is?

The Hostile Takeover

The Hostile Takeover

Yesterday, It was 25 degrees outside on the streets of the hospital.

There was a clown the came into the hospital with a bump on his head because he fell over. The nurse said “ what happened to you ” “ i fell over ” said the clown, the nurse said “ what did you fall over on ” “ nothing ” said the clown. Next the hole hospital staff started to lough. The clown yelled out “ IT’S SNOT FUNNY OK ” then everyone instantly stopped.

When the clown got out of the hospital and the police was on him so he ran and ran as far away as he can to the nearest park and stopped for a minute to play. Then the cops surrounded the playground so the clown had nowhere to go but there. One of the police officers came eout to play as well but his play was different to his. So he pulled out his taser and said “ freeze in the name of the law ” the clown the pulled out his knife and tried to stab him but luckily the police officer tased him before the clown got him

The Wedding

The Wedding

Who: Dad, Mum, Steffan, Katie, Blake, The Bridal Party, Jasmine, Sapphire and the rest of the wedding.

When: 17 July 2017

Where: in a church

Why: Because Katie and Blake were getting married

First, The day before the wedding the bridal party me and Steffan drove to the church to do a rehearsal so we know where we were standing. The order was me and Steffan, the bridal party, the flower girls lastly it was Katie.

Secondly, when we got to the church we had to and set the tables. Then we needed to get the food the for the kitchen to get it ready for the day, set all the cutlery out on the tables. After the men and woman had to be split up, all the men went to Nicky’s house and woman went to Katie’s house. Me and Steffan had to go with Mum because we are not allowed to be round Dad without Mum.

Thirdly, We drove and had photos done at the priest's house after the wedding was finished. After the photos were done we rushed back to the church for the speeches,food and drinks because everyone was getting hungry. Next, when that was finished we packed up the tables and put the chairs back out into the rows for the priest and the church. At last we got back to the house and we had a after party with alcohol and had some of the food that was left over from the church.

In my opinion i think that it was a great wedding because mostly everyone turned up but Blake’s mum has died and Katie’s mum couldn’t make it.

Freedom

WALT... Use words and pictures to convey our thoughts

Race Day

Race Day

On the track, Lucas ( The Lighting ) O'Halloran and Nicholas ( The Thunder  ) Kirkwood are going at it for the title of the street stock Championship title. They are about to hit the last lap,but  there is a big crash ahead of them where the white flag was, all the car were involved except O’Halloran and Kirkwood. They had to swerve round the other car so they could get past, the red flag waves in the air signaling us to stop and wait for the track to be clear so the race could go on.

After 20 minutes the track was clear and the green flag waved through the air signaling us to go, we speed of round turn 1 and 2 at this moment Kirkwood was in the lead and O’Halloran was in second. We were rubbing bumpers when suddenly The Crusher got hit really hard in the rear bumper, he spun round in a circle until he finally stop spinning around he continued with the race but he dropped down to third place. We are near the finish line and The Crusher is trying to take out the second place person so he can come try and take me out so he can win the championship for himself  

The Man In The Cabin

The Man In The Cabin

The man dropped down on the cold hard floor of the old abandoned cabin. Footsteps come closer and closer. He was dirty, cold and wet. The wind howls outside and the rain beats down.

The wind died down and the rain stops. He listened to the tune that the bird sung. It was sweet and beautiful. A shine of light shot through the window above him.

My Holiday

WALT... use correct structure for a recount 

This week we had to write a recount on our holidays and what we did. I really like how we got to write about what we did and what we had done. Next time i could work on doing some more descriptive words for me recounts

My Holiday

On Friday night, it was freezing cold but i had to drop of my sister off at Easter Camp at Spencer Park.

First, on Saturday - Monday i spent these days with the family. We went to the movies and watched the fate and furious/fast 8. then we went home to clean the house for a couple of days. Me and my mum picked up my sister from Easter Camp.

Next, we went to Greymouth to spend the five days with Dad, but all he wanted to do is work on his race car so it could be ready for Saturday. He got a huge hit to the rear on the left side, as you know i panicked a lot. So i raced over to him to see if he was all right. Dad went to the ambulance to see what was wrong with his shoulder.

After we got home we had my twin sisters over for the rest of the holidays. On the Thursday i stayed at Lucas’ house for the night. We went to his brothers room to play on his PS4 that he brought. Me and Lucas played Trove and Rocket League but manly Trove. Trove is like Minecraft mixed with Roblox. On Friday morning we took Lucas to the doctors to check up on his foot. When we got home me and Lucas went on the PS4 and played Trove before i had to go home.

T really liked my holidays because i got to see my friend and my sisters.

The ANZAC Puppy

WALT... write a flashback from a different perspective and use show not tell.
The ANZAC Puppy that we had to write about was made by Peter Millett and Trish Rowles. i really like this story because i can put the ideas that i put down into my perspective. Next time i need to put some more describing words into my planning. hope you enjoy.

The ANZAC Puppy

It was 25 degrees in the blistering sun.I am only a puppy so you would think that it was hot on the way.

When I go down the road I can see other people dressed like this guy is. Plus I feel sweaty now because i have been held for a long time. When i get to this place we are going to, that means we can play.

Next it was 1919 on the battlefield. It was about to end but suddenly a gun fired and got Sam’s friend, with one hit he died in an instant.

After the war had ended i arrived back at my house safe and sound where my owner was waiting.

Published By Nicholas

Leadership

WALT... identify the meaning of the 5 C's of Leadership. the 5 C's are Courage, Communication, Clarity,  Commitment and Confidence.

Camp

Overall Reflection (my time at camp)

Hello, I am going to tell you about the time i went to camp also my favourite, scariest, and most challenging things.

First, my favourite thing was the go karts because I am the fastest in the school to go round the track at Woodend Christian Camp with a time of 18.45.

Second, the scariest thing was my surgery because they had to put me asleep to get the pencil piece out of my foot.

Thirdly, the most challenging thing was the team building because we had to go over a pole that was very high off the ground and sit at the top,roll upside down and then get safely to the ground.

Finally, my final thoughts are that I had so much fun up to the time of my injury but other wise I bet Mr Norman in go karts by point 1 of a second YEA.

Thanks for your time!!!

The Race Around The World

	Where	What happened
Topic Sentence	I was braking round the corner	When i heard people cheering for me
Top Attributes	I am going down the highway	I hear some horrific screaming from the crowd
Middle Attribute	There are speeding  cars and roaring motorbikes coming	I can see my coach and family members
Bottom Attributes	I am going around another corner but i am speeding.
Conclusion

	Where	What happened
Topic Sentence	When i went round the corner	I am in 1st but before i exit the corner my chain came off.
Top Attributes	So i had to stop	And put it back on but surprisingly i lost 4 places.
Middle Attribute	I get back in the race	and i gaane 3 places now it’s a battle for 1st
Bottom Attributes	I try go to the left but he went to the left as well	Then i go to the right then he went to the right
Conclusion	So this was a challenge	I go to the left then i exaggerated to the right and i zoomed past and won first.

I was braking round the corner,When i heard people cheering for me. I am going down the highway I hear some horrific screaming from the crowd. There are speeding  cars and roaring motorbikes coming  I can see my coach and family members I am going around another corner but i am speeding.

When i went round the corner I am in 1st but before i exit the corner my chain came off So i had to stop And put it back on but surprisingly i lost 4 places I get back in the race and i gaane 3 places now it’s a battle for 1st I try go to the left but he went to the left as well Then i go to the right then he went to the right So this was a challenge I go to the left then i exaggerated to the right and i zoomed past and won first.

Persuasive wriing

My Reading

Does music help people learn or distract them? Does it depend on the music or the person

In my i think that music distracts people because you might not get your work done and if you have it up too loud the teacher she will growl.