The Race Around The World

	Where	What happened
Topic Sentence	I was braking round the corner	When i heard people cheering for me
Top Attributes	I am going down the highway	I hear some horrific screaming from the crowd
Middle Attribute	There are speeding  cars and roaring motorbikes coming	I can see my coach and family members
Bottom Attributes	I am going around another corner but i am speeding.
Conclusion

	Where	What happened
Topic Sentence	When i went round the corner	I am in 1st but before i exit the corner my chain came off.
Top Attributes	So i had to stop	And put it back on but surprisingly i lost 4 places.
Middle Attribute	I get back in the race	and i gaane 3 places now it’s a battle for 1st
Bottom Attributes	I try go to the left but he went to the left as well	Then i go to the right then he went to the right
Conclusion	So this was a challenge	I go to the left then i exaggerated to the right and i zoomed past and won first.

I was braking round the corner,When i heard people cheering for me. I am going down the highway I hear some horrific screaming from the crowd. There are speeding  cars and roaring motorbikes coming  I can see my coach and family members I am going around another corner but i am speeding.

When i went round the corner I am in 1st but before i exit the corner my chain came off So i had to stop And put it back on but surprisingly i lost 4 places I get back in the race and i gaane 3 places now it’s a battle for 1st I try go to the left but he went to the left as well Then i go to the right then he went to the right So this was a challenge I go to the left then i exaggerated to the right and i zoomed past and won first.