The ANZAC Puppy that we had to write about was made by Peter Millett and Trish Rowles. i really like this story because i can put the ideas that i put down into my perspective. Next time i need to put some more describing words into my planning. hope you enjoy.
The ANZAC Puppy
It was 25 degrees in the blistering sun.I am only a puppy so you would think that it was hot on the way.
When I go down the road I can see other people dressed like this guy is. Plus I feel sweaty now because i have been held for a long time. When i get to this place we are going to, that means we can play.
Next it was 1919 on the battlefield. It was about to end but suddenly a gun fired and got Sam’s friend, with one hit he died in an instant.
After the war had ended i arrived back at my house safe and sound where my owner was waiting.
Published By Nicholas
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