Wednesday 25 May 2016

Persuasive wriing

My Reading

Does music help people learn or distract them? Does it depend on the music or the person


In my i think that music distracts people because you might not get your work done and if you have it up too loud the teacher she will growl.

8 comments:

  1. I Have been thinking the same thing is only works for some people because you can see that some people just sit around and others use it and work better

    Connor
    http://paroagreyconnorh.blogspot.co.nz/

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    1. Hi Conner H, i read you comment on my persuasive writing, i think that i can do more work, i am about to cheek out your blog

      Nicholas
      http://stbsnicholask.blogspot.co.nz/

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  2. Hi Nicholas, after i read this i thought the exact thing. For instance i sometimes do it and it doesn't really help me but on the other hand some people might focus while listening to it. visit my blog at:
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  3. Hi Nicholas, l really like when you said if you have it to loud the teacher will growl. That was a good point. l like it when you made it shot and you get on to the point. and you were forcing on the distract part not anything else. good job

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  4. hi i like how you done that but next time i would get some one to read it before you post it because (in my i think that) that is what you wrote and it dose not make sence

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  5. hi i like how you done that but next time i would get some one to read it before you post it because (in my i think that) that is what you wrote and it dose not make sence

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  6. Hello, this is really interesting, but it depends what type of music. Some music helps you learn new words, but some songs will distract people, this is really interesting

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  7. Kia Ora Nicola It is Mackenzie. I go to Grey Main School. Well I think that music helps me for my work because I love my music. What is your favorite song? My favorite song is New soul remix.
    Well done on your work. Next time you could write a bit more on music.
    Mackenzie


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