Charlie lives with his family on a hill next to town. One day he found a dollar on the ground. He went to the shop and said to the shopkeeper “ i would like a chocolate bar please ”.
Thursday 26 May 2016
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I like how you have showed what the activity was. The post looked well set out but maybe next time you re-read your work and make sure there are no mistakes.
ReplyDeleteHi,I really like how you set up your work and showed what activity that you are working on.Maybe next time you could re-read your work and put more grater in you work
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