I was a student at St Bernadette's Primary School. This is a place where I shared my learning.
Thursday, 27 October 2016
Tuesday, 13 September 2016
Why should we Recycle?
Walt... learn about land fills and what they can do to us
Thursday, 25 August 2016
Wednesday, 24 August 2016
Monday, 22 August 2016
Friday, 19 August 2016
The Race Around The World
Where
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What happened
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Topic Sentence
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I was braking round the corner
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When i heard people cheering for me
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Top Attributes
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I am going down the highway
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I hear some horrific screaming from the crowd
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Middle Attribute
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There are speeding cars and roaring motorbikes coming
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I can see my coach and family members
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Bottom Attributes
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I am going around another corner but i am speeding.
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Conclusion
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Where
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What happened
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Topic Sentence
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When i went round the corner
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I am in 1st but before i exit the corner my chain came off.
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Top Attributes
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So i had to stop
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And put it back on but surprisingly i lost 4 places.
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Middle Attribute
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I get back in the race
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and i gaane 3 places now it’s a battle for 1st
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Bottom Attributes
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I try go to the left but he went to the left as well
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Then i go to the right then he went to the right
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Conclusion
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So this was a challenge
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I go to the left then i exaggerated to the right and i zoomed past and won first.
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I was braking round the corner,When i heard people cheering for me. I am going down the highway I hear some horrific screaming from the crowd. There are speeding cars and roaring motorbikes coming I can see my coach and family members I am going around another corner but i am speeding.
When i went round the corner I am in 1st but before i exit the corner my chain came off So i had to stop And put it back on but surprisingly i lost 4 places I get back in the race and i gaane 3 places now it’s a battle for 1st I try go to the left but he went to the left as well Then i go to the right then he went to the right So this was a challenge I go to the left then i exaggerated to the right and i zoomed past and won first.
Thursday, 18 August 2016
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