I was a student at St Bernadette's Primary School. This is a place where I shared my learning.
Thursday, 25 August 2016
Wednesday, 24 August 2016
Monday, 22 August 2016
Friday, 19 August 2016
The Race Around The World
Where
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What happened
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Topic Sentence
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I was braking round the corner
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When i heard people cheering for me
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Top Attributes
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I am going down the highway
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I hear some horrific screaming from the crowd
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Middle Attribute
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There are speeding cars and roaring motorbikes coming
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I can see my coach and family members
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Bottom Attributes
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I am going around another corner but i am speeding.
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Conclusion
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Where
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What happened
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Topic Sentence
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When i went round the corner
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I am in 1st but before i exit the corner my chain came off.
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Top Attributes
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So i had to stop
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And put it back on but surprisingly i lost 4 places.
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Middle Attribute
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I get back in the race
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and i gaane 3 places now it’s a battle for 1st
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Bottom Attributes
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I try go to the left but he went to the left as well
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Then i go to the right then he went to the right
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Conclusion
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So this was a challenge
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I go to the left then i exaggerated to the right and i zoomed past and won first.
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I was braking round the corner,When i heard people cheering for me. I am going down the highway I hear some horrific screaming from the crowd. There are speeding cars and roaring motorbikes coming I can see my coach and family members I am going around another corner but i am speeding.
When i went round the corner I am in 1st but before i exit the corner my chain came off So i had to stop And put it back on but surprisingly i lost 4 places I get back in the race and i gaane 3 places now it’s a battle for 1st I try go to the left but he went to the left as well Then i go to the right then he went to the right So this was a challenge I go to the left then i exaggerated to the right and i zoomed past and won first.
Thursday, 18 August 2016
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