Tuesday 21 November 2017

Descriptive Writing

WALT... Write descriptively using a rang of language

Plan

  • Sea of Sharks
  • Ancient Story
  • Mummys
  • Noon
  • 1988
  • Island

Oreantation

  • Who - Goofy
  • When - On a bright sunny day
  • Where - On an Island


Once there was an ancient story in the bottom of the sea of sharks. This is a story so ancient not even the mummy's can get it.

In 1988 there was a man named Goofy. Goofy was a nice a generous man who know everyone on the island ( The island is off the coast of Australia ). When Goofy heard about the ancient story he was not that kind and nice to everyone, he just wanted the story all to himself. There were more people that want the story as well, so he went with them but in the nice way, but what they didn’t know is that he was trying to get the story and keep it for himself.

When they arrived at the sea of sharks they seen the story, it was about 100 feet down under the sharks they had only one chance to get down there. Instead of going down one at a time to see how far one would go but no they all went at the same time. All of them died except 4 of the and there was only 20 people that had gone, when they got the bottom of the sea there is a little cave that they saw a glimpse of light that shone from the book.

2 comments:

  1. Hi there Nick i learned are lot of stuff from the story keep it up Nick

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  2. Hi Manuk,
    thank you for commenting on my blog. I really appreciate it. once again thank you

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