Friday 19 August 2016

The Race Around The World




Where
What happened
Topic Sentence
I was braking round the corner
When i heard people cheering for me
Top Attributes
I am going down the highway
I hear some horrific screaming from the crowd
Middle Attribute
There are speeding  cars and roaring motorbikes coming
I can see my coach and family members
Bottom Attributes
I am going around another corner but i am speeding.

Conclusion





Where
What happened
Topic Sentence
When i went round the corner
I am in 1st but before i exit the corner my chain came off.
Top Attributes
So i had to stop
And put it back on but surprisingly i lost 4 places.
Middle Attribute
I get back in the race
and i gaane 3 places now it’s a battle for 1st
Bottom Attributes
I try go to the left but he went to the left as well
Then i go to the right then he went to the right
Conclusion
So this was a challenge  
I go to the left then i exaggerated to the right and i zoomed past and won first.


I was braking round the corner,When i heard people cheering for me. I am going down the highway I hear some horrific screaming from the crowd. There are speeding  cars and roaring motorbikes coming  I can see my coach and family members I am going around another corner but i am speeding.

When i went round the corner I am in 1st but before i exit the corner my chain came off So i had to stop And put it back on but surprisingly i lost 4 places I get back in the race and i gaane 3 places now it’s a battle for 1st I try go to the left but he went to the left as well Then i go to the right then he went to the right So this was a challenge I go to the left then i exaggerated to the right and i zoomed past and won first.