Race Day
On the track, Lucas ( The Lighting ) O'Halloran and Nicholas ( The Thunder ) Kirkwood are going at it for the title of the street stock Championship title. They are about to hit the last lap,but there is a big crash ahead of them where the white flag was, all the car were involved except O’Halloran and Kirkwood. They had to swerve round the other car so they could get past, the red flag waves in the air signaling us to stop and wait for the track to be clear so the race could go on.
After 20 minutes the track was clear and the green flag waved through the air signaling us to go, we speed of round turn 1 and 2 at this moment Kirkwood was in the lead and O’Halloran was in second. We were rubbing bumpers when suddenly The Crusher got hit really hard in the rear bumper, he spun round in a circle until he finally stop spinning around he continued with the race but he dropped down to third place. We are near the finish line and The Crusher is trying to take out the second place person so he can come try and take me out so he can win the championship for himself
hi Nicholas i like that you made your own car maybe next time you should add more coler to the writing
ReplyDeleteHi Manuk,
DeleteYour comment is good and I will try to put some more color into my writing. Next time can you work on putting full stops and comers.
Nicholas